Sustainability Stories from Ole Miss
Michelle HeroldI think it would look better if you show some people biking in the beginning instead of just the still bike shots. It looks great!
Good job. Maybe include some more footage of people biking on campus or around town..
Great way to get more people on bikes. Very informative the audio went great with the images. Could use more captions. -al
Your topic was very good and fits the area. The voiceover was great on the video too!The only thing I would change on your video is more B-Roll and less still pictures - although, your pictures are all good shots.Also, some of the stats that you mentioned, you could post as a graphic on the video too to make a better impact of the information to the view.Comment by:Shana Kent
Good job. Maybe include some more video shots of people biking around campus or around town.
I think by adding b-roll with actual sound and movement would help and also titles of speakers.
Consistent audio levels throughout would help the video flow more evenly or perhaps allow for more natural sound. -- Thomas Sanders
Also, some work to even out the audio would make the interview more clear and easier to understand.
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Michelle Herold
ReplyDeleteI think it would look better if you show some people biking in the beginning instead of just the still bike shots. It looks great!
Good job. Maybe include some more footage of people biking on campus or around town..
ReplyDeleteGreat way to get more people on bikes. Very informative the audio went great with the images. Could use more captions. -al
ReplyDeleteYour topic was very good and fits the area. The voiceover was great on the video too!
ReplyDeleteThe only thing I would change on your video is more B-Roll and less still pictures - although, your pictures are all good shots.
Also, some of the stats that you mentioned, you could post as a graphic on the video too to make a better impact of the information to the view.
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Shana Kent
Good job. Maybe include some more video shots of people biking around campus or around town.
ReplyDeleteI think by adding b-roll with actual sound and movement would help and also titles of speakers.
ReplyDeleteConsistent audio levels throughout would help the video flow more evenly or perhaps allow for more natural sound. -- Thomas Sanders
ReplyDeleteAlso, some work to even out the audio would make the interview more clear and easier to understand.
ReplyDelete