Nov 2, 2009

Going Green on a Red & Blue Campus

By: Lindsay Jordan, Ofelya Minasyan, Austin Monroe, and Danielle Ligato

6 comments:

  1. Creative music, a lot of jumping though. Good interviews. -al

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  2. Good job. Maybe adding a script could make a more clear transition from shot to shot. -Rebecca R.

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  3. This is really good. You may want to think about putting something at the bottom when the guys start talking. We have no idea who they are. Also, the fight song is really loud. - Andrea Buccilla

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  4. Titles for the people are needed. I think the fight song gets a little repetitive. - Chip Gayden

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  5. Add lots more interview b-roll, vary the sequence changes, and use "Go Rebels go!" a little less - not everytime you change interviews. -- Thomas Sanders

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  6. Shorten the interview clips. Make sure you either introduce the people being interviewed or use text subtitles on the clips, so the viewer knows who is speaking and why their opinion is relevant to the topic. -- Morgan Eaves

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